FACTBOOK English Logic and Expression I &Ⅱダイジェスト版
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■I hope the solutions presented above are practical and easy enough for the city to make a P(           )   R(           )   S(           )(           )   S(           )Thinking Logically 2 Well-managed city for the future67評価A2+評価B1 Step 4 Improving Improve your draft after working on Model Paragraph A and B.Improve your draft after working on Model Paragraph A and B.one of the three types:P (problem), R (reason) and S (solution).for Improvement” described below.Tips for Improvement解決策と効果のつながりを正確に示すため,Model Paragraph Aの④の文を書き換えると?(①:直接的な効果? それともさらな解決策と効果のつながりを正確に示すため,Model Paragraph Aの④の文を書き換えると?(①:直接的な効果? それともさらなる効果?)予想される問題への解決や言及は?(②:店にとっての不利益の懸念への回答は?)結論文をさらに強めるため,Model Paragraph Aの⑥の文を書き換えると?(③:あいまいな表現を避けると?)[Model Paragraph A]1) Analyze the logical flow of the paragraph below and categorize sentences ① to ⑥ into [Model Paragraph B]2) Fill in the blanks to make a better connection between sentences by referring to the “Tips 2) Fill in the blanks to make a better connection between sentences by referring to the ■Clearly, something needs to be done to solve the problem of light pollution in the city. ■The night sky is so bright that we can’t enjoy the stars and feel closer to the nature. ■One thing that would improve the situation would be to require buildings in the downtown area to turn off their lights at 9 p.m. ■This would save electricity and discourage people from working too late. ■Another thing the city should do is reduce the brightness of store signs by about 50 percent. ■I hope the city decides to do something about the light pollution as it is bad for people and could be fixed somewhat easily. Clearly, something needs to be done to solve the problem of light pollution in the city. The night sky is so bright that we can’t enjoy the stars and feel closer to the nature. One thing that would improve the situation would be to require buildings in the downtown area to turn off their lights at 9 p.m. ■should do is reduce the brightness of store signs by about 50 percent. ■quick decision to protect citizens from the light pollution. Another thing the city モデルパラグラフを参考にしながら,Step 3で書いた下書きを改善します。上のモデルパラグラフを発展させたパラグラフを掲載しています。モデルパラグラフにおいてどのような改善がされているかを示すことで,生徒が自らのパラグラフを書き直す際に必要な視点を与えます。モデルパラグラフの構成を分析します。

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