FACTBOOK English Logic and Expression I &Ⅱダイジェスト版
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●B A jump in logic between the sentences(文と文との間の飛躍): [ ] and [ ] Tip! 問題と解決策の両者に触れているか?(両者にはつながりがあり,十分に説明されているか?)●C Deviation from the main point of the argument(主旨からの逸脱): [ ]■■■で■き■■る■■に■■■■■■■決■の■■■■■を書くことができる。■■■決■の■■の■ー■ー■を■■し■■■■えをしながら■■■を書くことができる。現代において都市はさまざまな問題を抱えています。あなたはどの問題を解決すべきだと考えますか。また,それにはどのような解決策がありますか。The city of Helsinki, where you can find both urbanization and sustainabilityCan-Can-Do!Do!Issue62Points of Improvement●A Lack of enough explanation for the readers(読み手への説明不足): [ ] urbanization does this city show?What signs of Would you like your city to be more like Helsinki? ①I think urbanization is very harmful to both nature and human beings. ②It causes poor air and water quality. ③It also makes cities use more electricity because the population is so large and dense. ④City planning with a focus on sustainability will be greatly needed. ⑤We should reduce the number of children as the world’s population continues to grow. Tip! 自然と人間への害(問題)について十分な情報はあるか?(人間への害についてはどうか?) Tip! 都市計画はどう関係するか?(解決策の提案はその答えになっているか?)Small Talk Small Talk Thinking Logically 2Process Writing Tips After you finish your writing assignment, you should check for errors in not only grammar After you finish your writing assignment, you should check for errors in not only grammar or vocabulary, but also logic and flow. Read the following short paragraph and find the logical gaps.Task 1Find the logical gaps in a paragraphDiscuss where the logical gaps lie in the paragraph. Then, fill in the blanks below with the Discuss where the logical gaps lie in the paragraph. Then, fill in the blanks below with the numbers of the sentences which have a logical gap.【Topic】都市化の問題と解決策(SDGs⑨⑪対応)▶ 通常Unit(本課ではUnit 3,4)とのテーマ的なつながりを持たせています。短めのパラグラフを例に文章を改善するタスクを行い,論理的な文章の書き方を学びます。上のサンプル文から論理的な問題点を見つけます。Well-managed city for the futureWell-managed city for the future

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