12345689Unit7Unit10UnitUnitUnitUnitUnitUnitUnitUnit●BIf more people use public buses, we can reduce traffic congestion and that will ➡ If more people use public buses, . Tip! ・２つの節をまとめてつながりを強くすると？（「交通渋滞の解消」と「環境の改善」の因果関係は？） ・断定し過ぎている言葉は？（絶対的に改善される？） ・ややあいまいな部分は？（何の環境？）■■■■に■■■■■た■■を■とに■■■ることができ■■■■■■■■を■決■る■■に■■■■■■ることができ■■■■■■の■■■■の■■■に■■書を書くことができ■■■■Can-Do!Unit 4 Is your city sustainable enough?59評価A2+[Model Request B]Fill in the blanks to make a better connection between sentences by referring to the “Tips for Improvement” described below.Tips for Improvement問題点を具体的に述べると？（①交通渋滞によりどんな問題が生じている？）提案により期待される効果は？（②バスが利用しやすくなるとどうなる？）結論文を工夫すると？（③具体的な提案内容も含めてまとめると？）Even better!Try to improve the quality of language and logical connections by combining and/or restructuring sentences and adding and/or replacing expressions.●A I would like to ask you to make public transportation practical.➡ PresentationYour request was received by the city and you need to make a presentation about it. Make a presentation draft by using your request. →Check pp.162-164 Making a presentationTo whom it may concern, I am a resident of Aoba City and have a favor to ask of you. There is traffic congestion during commuting time in our city.■improve our environment. ●AI would like to ask you to make public transportation practical. ●BIf more people use public buses, we can reduce traffic congestion and that will improve our environment. Though we already have our community buses which produce less greenhouse gases, they don’t run frequently. So I’d like to suggest that you lower the price of the commuter pass so that people will rely less on cars. ■ ■Please create more reasonably-priced, efficient, and eco-friendly ways to commute to the city. I really appreciate you taking the time to read this. Tip! 説明や言葉が足りない部分は？（今は実用的ではない？ 誰にとって実用的？）Write More+Improve your request after working on Model Request B.
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